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| "Ryo's Journal Part 1: Keep It Down" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Ladymynx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your First Year Story on your LJ and am enjoying it, so I'm glad I've found other stories of yours. I was really impressed with how you described the interaction between Dee and Ryo especially how Ryo showed his "naughty side". An extra added bonus that gave me a chuckle was where they "almost" get caught! Looking forward to readng more of your works.
| Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written, good content and a great take on Dee and Ryo's relationship. I thought that it was great about one of the boyz hearing Ryo shout from inside the van. That was funny. Your a good writter. Keep up the great work.
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