| "Beautiful Stranger" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, that was deep, and very good, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Raberba girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 15:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Some phrases are repeated too often, but overall it's a nice fic.
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Reviewed By: faye_valentine28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so gooD1 I love how your useage of repetition and how you talked in the third person! It definitely fits poor Ayame to a "T"! Keep up the good work!!
Faye |
