Reviewed By: Storming Lilacs On: May 04, 2011 20:13 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Oh my goodness. I didn't know you had G/V slash posted here. I enjoyed this fic immensely. Vegeta quiet dismay at Goku's hesitance and then anger for his pity was just *perfect*. Like you could just feel the hurt pouring off Vegeta and his own resentment for it.
Title: Sunset Reviewed By: Sofitia On: September 23, 2006 20:23 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: This story is great I like your style of writing and it would be really nice if you posted another chapter. Soon. Thsi story is so cute, Vegetas character is perfect. It does not always have to be him being mean all the time. You should really continue with another chapter.
