"A Trainer's Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Neat ^-^ Reviewed By: angel-of-time On: January 09, 2007 14:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Most enjoyable! You really have talent there! I loved the way your character caught Pokemon and how she wants to train them individually, not like Ash, who usually has some Pokemon with him for a very long time and first gets them when he really needs them. (Not saying that Ash is bad though *sweet drop*) I like the way how you brought Tod in as well, since I rarely saw him in the show, plus I can finally read about him! Sad that he is leaving T.T, though. But all in all, my time reading it was very relaxing and I had to laugh a few times, good story. I hope you can get some new Chapters up soon, have fun writing it ^^.
| Title: Best story l`ve ever read!! Reviewed By: Nessa Lynn On: December 21, 2006 00:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the best story l`ve ever read.Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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