| "Rubbing The Lamp" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shannonigans On: June 27, 2007 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic, it actually got me into ouran! I had never seen it before and I was looking for something good to read, so I clicked on your story... and before I knew it, I was looking up what the characters looked like on wikipedia and watching the episodes! now i absolutely love it and I'm so glad I decided to read your fic... I can't wait for your next chapter! And for me it's Haruhi x Mori all the way! Haha
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 20:35 EDT
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ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!! i loved it...the twin's mom was just one of a kind...I really feel just like her...super funny (my fav pairing up to now )
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Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say my words of encouragement for this fic- it's origional and addicting and I can't wait until you update again! Also I want to praise the depth you put into your characters, it's a rare prize to find an author who can stay true to the origional, and let the character "grow" into their own work. =^.^= Kepp writing! You're great! -GK
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Reviewed By: cattiemae On: June 26, 2007 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly, I'm amazed by your story. This is simply my 2nd favourite fic out of the thousands that I've read. I haven't seen any story quite like yours, although there are common elements, you've made them entirely yours to manipulate. In this chapter though, did you perhaps rush it? I just wanted to point out that some of your sentences were incomplete, words missing. It gets me frustrated whenever I think of who Haruhi will end up with, if she even ends up with someone (she will though, won't she??). I mean...It's not like all SIX guys can share her...*day-dreams* hmmm, no way! But I do hope she ends up with Kaoru&Hikaru. Too hot for words. *Sigh* I guess, Haruhi is fair game though. Anyway, dude, this fic gets me too excited and pumped up for more. My friends were ashamed to hang around me in the library as I was squealing way too much when I was reading the previous chapter the day after you uploaded it. I really like your dialogue too! It's intelligent, witty, and hilariously embarrassing for Haruhi "...But if it's both, I do want to hear all about the first time you have sex with the two of them together!" Um, awesome anyone? Highlight of the entire chapter. Favourite chapter, I must say, is when Haruhi had massaged Huni. To.Die.For. Eagerly anticipating a.k.a desperately waiting, for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 06:22 EDT
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i love how the twins mom talked to haruhi so funny . lol
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: envy-chan On: June 26, 2007 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading moris first wish and i wanted to thank you for making me hungry for sushi at 4:00 in the morning.lol well your stury is really good and ima going to keep reading. Hmmmmm...i usually dont read these kinda fanfics but yours is so awsome. I never really thought much of more but you made me apreciate him more. wow i really want some salmon right now....lol
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Title: Imaginative
Reviewed By: Sej On: June 26, 2007 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the only work I've given five straight 10s to. I really like how you've animated the twins' mother. She's really cool. And while I'm reading each chapter, I feel like the person (or in the twins' case, people) making his (their) wish deeply care for Haruhi and could happily just be with her forever--so as much as I was rooting for Hunny or Kyouya or Tamaki or Mori in their chapters, I'm cheering the twins on right now. And will there be a 10b?
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 23:03 EDT
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That was sooooooooooooo amazingly hilarious! I could not stop laughing and saying "this is too good" through the whole thing, especially the conversation with Mama Hitachiin. I really hope you can post the next chapter soon. I was so happy when I saw that this one was up. I can't wait to see what other wishes they all come up with.
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Reviewed By: Pinku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first Ouran Host Club fanfic I've read. I am now reluctant to read any more-- they won't be as good as this, will they? Everything about this fic, from the dialogue to your characterizations is completely engaging and I eagerly await the rest. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: AIAIndiana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 03:33 EDT
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I just finished reading the story (well, what you have done so far) and I love it! I love the way it's going! To be honest, I'm only interested in how things go with Kyouya and Mori, but I've enjoyed every chapter. Please update soon! ^_^
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Title: whoa...
Reviewed By: nekoastrid On: June 14, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...this is really good, I don't think I've ever thought about haru-chan and huni-chan together like that. even though he is one of the oldest of the host club his loli-shota attitude kinda makes it hard to picture him in that way but you sooo make it work, I'm actully starting to like hat pairing. my fav pairing already is mori/haru so that just adds to my admiration for this fic. your good. I hope to update soon I wanna see the twins second wishes (i'm actully not into them being paired with haru, there more like annoying but funny brothers) and I want to see what everyone has planed for there third wishes. its gotta be something a little risky since all of them seem to be holding back for that last one. awww please update soon! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 17:27 EDT
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This chapter was so great! I love carefree Kyouya, but I can't wait for the next chapter. I really want to get to the rest of the wishes. I'm so curious as to what they'll be.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 (too lazy to login) On: May 30, 2007 17:20 EDT
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Ooh, how close are we to the final wishes????? *jumps up and down excitedly* This is an amazing story! You capture a side of the Host Club that no one sees, especially older Honey and carefree Kyoya, exceptionally well. I'm amazed at the way I remember exactly what's happened even though I haven't just read the previous chapters. That doesn't happen much. All I have to do is read the last few lines of the last chapter and I'm already back where we left off. I can't wait to read more of this outstanding story! Happy writings! ~Tori-chan, your very dedicated fan~
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Title: Hahhh...
Reviewed By: Nanita On: May 29, 2007 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think of all the OHC fanfics I've read... this is the only one I actually remember and look forward to. I never think this way about a fanfic but if you don't keep continuing? (I don't care when, just as long as it's within the decade) I think a flash of pain will hit my heart... Wonderful work. I looove iiiittt.... And one of the specific reasons is just the very tender way you handle all the characters. (Though I wouldn't be wrong to guess you like Kyoya a bit more than some of the other boys I think... honestly who could blame you!) And as far as criticism goes... I really have none. So, again, wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: awesome story On: May 29, 2007 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
christ...cinnamon...who would have thought...i wish i was haruhi...continue the story or i will send trained monkies after you. FEAR THE PRIMATE!
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