| "Rubbing The Lamp" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: Honebar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 11:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I know is that this story is beyond amazing! This latest wish had me squirming in jaw dropping amazement. You have the both of them pegged to the tea. I could almost see this story being run as a manga it is that good.
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Reviewed By: CaLucEmber On: April 01, 2007 09:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely awesome. Usually I hate reading Ouran stories because most people can't make it work...but you did that and so much more. Almost every word I read I got really excited, and I have to force myself to slow down because I'm so eager to find out what else happens. OMGsh, who is she going to end up with?! I don't know who I want her to be with...but if I had to choose, I DON'T want her to be with Tamaki. I'm not sure, but I just feel that way =/. Anyway! This has been one of the best fanfics I've read in a long, long time. No spelling/grammar mistakes (that I've picked up on anyway, maybe I was more focussed on the content? Doubt it though..) Beautiful style of writing, so smooth and flowing and uber exciting. Creativity and enjoyment factor...*(gigglegigglex100)* It's, OH MAN, you should see my palms, my nails have been digging into them since I got waaaaay too excited. Overall factor? EXCELLANT. BRILLIANT. SUPERB. etc =D
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Reviewed By: lyndsie On: March 31, 2007 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i love this story!!! please write more!
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Reviewed By: lyndsie On: March 23, 2007 18:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. O.O you must be the f'cking god of ohshc fics. it's an honor to read your work.
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Reviewed By: irishlily On: March 18, 2007 21:36 EDT
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I really hope you haven't abandoned this fic, because I really, really love it!
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Reviewed By: cpd3 On: March 17, 2007 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You have created a situation based on Ouran that is believable and very enjoyable to read. There are a few minor grammar mistakes, but they hardly subtract from the overall story. The characters are extremly believable and stick to the personalities given to them by Hatorisan very well. Thank you for creating a very enjoyable piece- please continue it as soon as possible!
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Title: BRAVO!!!!!
Reviewed By: emeraldeyes55 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 12:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! it's awesome! I myself am a mori/haruhi fan, because he's just so...so...*girly squeal* I hope you chose him to end the story seeing as there aren't many mori/haruhi fics. my second choice would be huni (never thought I'd say that!) I love how you portrayed huni in this. you make him an adult without taking away his personality or boyish looks and without making it disturbing! btw good idea to make him a bit taller with adult thoughts! honestly if he was still shorter than haruhi and having all these dirty thoughts...it would be...weird...and uncomfortable...but, ANYWAYS! moving on. A good idea-just a suggestion-would be to make separate closing chapters, each with haruhi ending up with one of the guys- so that way everyone's happy! *thinking: but that may take longer* *shrugs* oh well just a suggestion-you don't have to do it... just that everyone has a different guy or two that they want haruhi to end up with. WEELLLL! keep up the awesomest work! *tiny whisper voice: please update!*
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: AngelChii49 On: February 26, 2007 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!you have GOT to update this! its one of the best Ouran stories ive ever read! YOU ROCK!!
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Reviewed By: libertyrjac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 05:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic, probably the most amazing thing is that you've kept the characters in their original character when this setting is outside of their norm. I don't think they'd do this in the anime! This is great, please write more. Oh and responding to your note after Huni's massage. I am a massage therapist and that's a fairly normal response. Of course, that ending is not intended, and I definately do not provide or incourage them. The only thing unprofessional is when working the butt never grab, but of course a novice wouldn't know that. I really liked that scene and found it completley realistic, it was very similar to one of my own experiences. Which makes me laugh all the harder!!
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Reviewed By: flameblessed On: February 23, 2007 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely in love with this fic it has got to be my favorite in a long time! My favorite date so far was the twins first date though that is probably because I am a major Haruhi/twins fan but I really do love this story can't wait to read more!^_^
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Reviewed By: sesshysluver101 On: February 13, 2007 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a really good story and i hope you continue to write more chapters for this story its really good so keep it up. i cant wait for the third wishes.
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Reviewed By: YonderTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahaha! I loved that! I can just imagine that happening too... Haruhi being completely clueless on the matter... classic. Her dad as well, I loved how you wrote his reaction to her story.. and his last line was priceless.. loved it. Until next update...
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Reviewed By: sasuluvssaku4now [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 22:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fanfic ^_^ but some places lacked detail and can be quite confusing on who your talking about, while others are overwhelming with descriptions and strays away from your real meaning which tends to mess with what your trying to say. I like how you keep Haruhi in character but I'd request for more interaction with Tamaki and Kyouya. I'm looking forward for the rest of the fic
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Title: thanks! plz update soon!
Reviewed By: kitt90 On: February 05, 2007 19:10 EST
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omg nice ^_^ can't wait till ur next update!!! plz update soon! i think that it would be really cute if haruhi did end up with huni ^_~
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Reviewed By: *kairi* On: February 03, 2007 01:51 EST
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omg this is an awesome fanfic! I really like the interaction between Haruhi and all the members of the host club and how they all get a chance with her. I'm really impressed so just keep up the good work :)
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