| "Rubbing The Lamp" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Title: Imaginative
Reviewed By: Sej On: June 26, 2007 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the only work I've given five straight 10s to. I really like how you've animated the twins' mother. She's really cool. And while I'm reading each chapter, I feel like the person (or in the twins' case, people) making his (their) wish deeply care for Haruhi and could happily just be with her forever--so as much as I was rooting for Hunny or Kyouya or Tamaki or Mori in their chapters, I'm cheering the twins on right now. And will there be a 10b?
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 23:03 EDT
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That was sooooooooooooo amazingly hilarious! I could not stop laughing and saying "this is too good" through the whole thing, especially the conversation with Mama Hitachiin. I really hope you can post the next chapter soon. I was so happy when I saw that this one was up. I can't wait to see what other wishes they all come up with.
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Reviewed By: Pinku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first Ouran Host Club fanfic I've read. I am now reluctant to read any more-- they won't be as good as this, will they? Everything about this fic, from the dialogue to your characterizations is completely engaging and I eagerly await the rest. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: AIAIndiana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 03:33 EDT
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I just finished reading the story (well, what you have done so far) and I love it! I love the way it's going! To be honest, I'm only interested in how things go with Kyouya and Mori, but I've enjoyed every chapter. Please update soon! ^_^
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Title: whoa...
Reviewed By: nekoastrid On: June 14, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...this is really good, I don't think I've ever thought about haru-chan and huni-chan together like that. even though he is one of the oldest of the host club his loli-shota attitude kinda makes it hard to picture him in that way but you sooo make it work, I'm actully starting to like hat pairing. my fav pairing already is mori/haru so that just adds to my admiration for this fic. your good. I hope to update soon I wanna see the twins second wishes (i'm actully not into them being paired with haru, there more like annoying but funny brothers) and I want to see what everyone has planed for there third wishes. its gotta be something a little risky since all of them seem to be holding back for that last one. awww please update soon! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 17:27 EDT
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This chapter was so great! I love carefree Kyouya, but I can't wait for the next chapter. I really want to get to the rest of the wishes. I'm so curious as to what they'll be.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 (too lazy to login) On: May 30, 2007 17:20 EDT
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Ooh, how close are we to the final wishes????? *jumps up and down excitedly* This is an amazing story! You capture a side of the Host Club that no one sees, especially older Honey and carefree Kyoya, exceptionally well. I'm amazed at the way I remember exactly what's happened even though I haven't just read the previous chapters. That doesn't happen much. All I have to do is read the last few lines of the last chapter and I'm already back where we left off. I can't wait to read more of this outstanding story! Happy writings! ~Tori-chan, your very dedicated fan~
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Title: Hahhh...
Reviewed By: Nanita On: May 29, 2007 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think of all the OHC fanfics I've read... this is the only one I actually remember and look forward to. I never think this way about a fanfic but if you don't keep continuing? (I don't care when, just as long as it's within the decade) I think a flash of pain will hit my heart... Wonderful work. I looove iiiittt.... And one of the specific reasons is just the very tender way you handle all the characters. (Though I wouldn't be wrong to guess you like Kyoya a bit more than some of the other boys I think... honestly who could blame you!) And as far as criticism goes... I really have none. So, again, wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: awesome story On: May 29, 2007 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
christ...cinnamon...who would have thought...i wish i was haruhi...continue the story or i will send trained monkies after you. FEAR THE PRIMATE!
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Reviewed By: yeahjesse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything you have here is fleshed-out so nicely. Please continue to update and never abandon this project.
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Reviewed By: arthist On: May 28, 2007 21:42 EDT
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Wonderful! Fabulous!!! Moremoremoremoremore!!! Please :) As you can tell, I am really enjoying this story! Look forward to the future updates!
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Title: 9b
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 12:51 EDT
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Incredibly erotic for a PG chapter. *fans*
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Reviewed By: Honebar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 10:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh. that was soo good! I don't have the right words to discribe how much. ^_^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 10:04 EDT
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That was so romantic I could just fell myself in his arms dancing and all.../../great chap....
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Reviewed By: lyndsie On: May 27, 2007 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! :'(
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