"New Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: wildactyuri18 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2011 17:09 EST Comment/Review: Dude i love this story please update it soon | Reviewed By: Juria [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 02:37 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I found this story to be one of few gems in the Lilo x Stitch pairing, so far. I'm curious, why do you refer to Stitch's alien language as "Turian"? Nothing major, just a thought, as I've heard it only refered to as Tantalog. Overall, I found myself enjoying every minute of this story, almost like drawing myself into a more mature episode, or even a movie. :) I humbly hope you do update this story, when you find the time, as it is a piece of artwork, and no one like an unfinished masterpiece.
| Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 00:22 EDT Comment/Review: So Leroy is 6-2-8? or did you just make that up, considering that Wikipedia lists experiment 628 as unactivated and unknown? Then again, that could be wrong. Ah well, it's only a story. Regarding Lilo's comment to "Zoe" about being fair yet just, I think I like that one boxing referee's quote best: "fair, but firm." Or was it "firm, but fair?" Been too long since I even saw a boxing match. Heck, i don't even remember the guy's name. Still, thia was enjoyable. Any plans for Lilo to borrow Shush from Corba Bubbles to help in case Hamsterville shows up? I look forward, as usual, to your works. I can almost imagine Nani's reaction ot the news about the evil gerbil. He he he!
| Reviewed By: Ninja Kasuga On: September 25, 2006 03:26 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Most excellent!! This fic looks to be very kicka$$ Arch my friend. I am eager for more of your evil genius.
| Reviewed By: Ninja Kasuga On: September 25, 2006 03:25 EDT Comment/Review: Brilliant!! Tis awesomeness on your scale of evil genius goodness Arch! I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 20:44 EDT Comment/Review: What? Nobody's reveiwed this story? Just where is everybody?! Has fanfic-dom died? ...Oh well, at least I'll be the first to leave a coment on here. Though I have read your pre-posting version before, it's greta to see you post it up here, Arch. You captured the essence of the characters quite well, though I gotta wonder, where is David? Meh, but that is a minor detail. I look forward, as always, to your future writings my friend. -R80
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