| "Harry Potter: Encounter with the King of the Monsters" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: ther-challge-of-gobots-ecunter-vangaeruaerd
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: July 05, 2011 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
howabout-challge-of-gobots-encunters-vabgaeruaerd |
Title: yaes-idw-will-do-comicbook of godzilla
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: October 16, 2010 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaes yah reamuors-about iwd-is godzilla-comicbooks
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Title: will-ther the-worst-waitch encounter the-the-the-inhuaniods!!?
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: July 27, 2010 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
will the-worst-waitch-encounter the-the-inhuaniods!!?
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Title: will-ther-godzilla-vs-the-terasnfomer-caeroosover-made!?
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: January 17, 2010 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
will-ther-godzilla-vs-the-terasnfomers-caeroosover-made!?
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Title: wich-godzalla-is-this!!?
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: December 08, 2009 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
somethining-is-buging-waitch-godzalla-is-taht-did-meet-haryy-potter-the-god zalla-form-the-mioves-or-godzalla-of-godzalla-the-saires so-i-put-you
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Title: will-ouer-heros-faigh-ther-aerch-eameys-anytime soon!!
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: December 07, 2009 14:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
will-ouer-faigth-ther-aerchemey-soon!?
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Title: did-ouer-heros,s-aercheamey-meet-tow
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: November 03, 2009 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
somethining-buging-me-did-ouer-hero-aercheameys-meet-tow
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Title: i woder-if-ther-more-to-harry-potter-encuntering-waith-the-kig-of-mosters
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: July 14, 2009 09:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
somethinig-buging-me--i belive ther-more-to-harrypotter-encountering-the-kig-mosters
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Title: i woder-if-machagodzalla-haes-anythining waith-this-caeroosover
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: April 03, 2009 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
something-buging-me-dos machagodzalla-anythining do harrypotter-encountering-waith-the-kig-of-mosters/godzalla so-i-put-to-you
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Title: what-wood-being-harrypotter&godzalla-toghter!!?
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: June 25, 2008 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah hhm-i-woder-what-wood-bering-harrypoter&godzalla-toghter-maby-combat-de monic-big-demonic-moster-this-my-thory
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Title: heeep -me bairly-know-about haerry-potter
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: April 01, 2008 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah heeeple-me-i barryly-know-anything about harrypotter-saires
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Title: Structure
Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 15:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only problem you have is in spacing. Your whole story is in single paragraphs. In each chapter the different parts run together and it makes it hard to understand what goes where. You need to separate everything into separate paragraphs so people can read it easier.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 14:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm, good story. I like reading it, and look foward to more chapters, though we do all get busy durign the school year. Though a personal note, could you please do something about the spacing? It's kinda hard to keep track of the story when it's so closely spaced together. THanks, later.
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