| "Hidden tears" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow @DEL@ On: November 10, 2006 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good...this is turning ut better than I had imagined.Very nicely putt together so far:)I wonder what's gonna happen next...you already told me but...don't let her...You know better. Waiting for the next chapie:D
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 23:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is very detailed and everything. you can feel that Nessa felt really connected to her home and family. it that she just had diffucult ties with them right now. i don't read D.N Angel so yeah. i'm really mad when they said to forget your family cuz that is impossible to forget something you love. i would have kill someone if they said that to me. any way keep up the great work!
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Title: :P:>P:P
Reviewed By: Shadow @DEL@ On: October 07, 2006 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice Lidia!*Aplauds her ass off the pc chair*.Liked the whole ball night thing.And I found out what you were listening during one of those days.LOLI listen to Saliva all the time. Very nice again.Can't wait for the next chapie:)
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Title: :P
Reviewed By: Shadow @DEL@ On: October 05, 2006 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked it.But that thing with Orfin was a bit...O.O spooky.I liked the part with Talla.But what does the word with k he called her mean? Nice!Wanna read nr 5:D
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Shadow @DEL@ On: October 05, 2006 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like it.Like the e-mail part.My brother wouldn't give a d**n about me.The sunset scene was really beautifull.I can almost imagine a monster with big bat-like wings on a rainy sky.Really nice.:)
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Shadow @DEL@ On: October 05, 2006 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
E suuuper.I liked the part with the "taci drecu din gura".Credeam k pic cu scaunul d ras.I can imagine Nessa doing the thing with her hair^_^ Wanna read more.
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Title: You know me
Reviewed By: Shadow @DEL@ On: October 05, 2006 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Silver-Lidia,this is just superbe!How could you say this is boring?I'm hooked to this story.But I know you,is this inspired by things that really happened?Really loving it:)
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