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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 02:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god that was beyond amazing! It has been so long since i have read a fanfic and i must say returning with this one was such a treat! I love Vincent and Axel's relationship, the trusting yet teasing and witty friendship is so very enjoyable to read. I must say i am so happy that Roxas will return soon and that the plan with the Way to Dawn succeeded. As always the writing was amazing, the entire time i found myself holding my breath to see what would happen next. Especially with that frustrating yet very well done cliffhanger you put at the end of the chapter. Oh and before i forget i must tell you that i loved the part where Cid gave Vincent his military tags again and told him "no forgetting" it was sugar coated sweet, tid bits such as those really get to me, as i am a romantic at heart. It was just SOO CUTE >///_< i really want Roxas back! after reading the cliffhanger i was like O_O WHAT HAPPENS?!? DOES ROXAS REMEMBER?! ARE THEY TOO LATE?!?!, questions ran and even now run through my brain) Thank you for updating and writing such wonderful stories. your loyal reader anime_lover_kohaku (im back and here to stay ^-^)
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. *SQEEEEEAL* This is the best beyond best fanfiction I've ever EVER read!!! I can't stop grinning stupidly every time I think of it. And I've even taken to babbling to my brother about it. Minus the yaoi scenes cos he's.. my younger brother. Please update asap!! *grins stupidly again*
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Reviewed By: Zaxel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 06:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This is getting sooo exciting! I cant wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the amazing work! I'm staying with this fic until the end! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Hitoshirezu On: October 03, 2007 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually saved all the chapters up to chapter 11 (or 15/16?) and I read them all in one shot because once I started I couldn't stop. And then when I got to the end i was like "WHAT?!" and I'm very happy you'd written the next chapter lol You absolutely must continue with this story. It's very interesting, and the plot is something that drew me in. As a fellow author, I give you so many props. There are a few things that you might want to elaborate on, like Axel noticeing the other Organization members in Gaia's Grotto, but otherwise, i think this story is brilliant, and I've fallen in love with it. I can't wait until you put up the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 07:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter seems as good as your others to me, i do not understand why you think less of it. I can honestly say though that this chapter annoyed me Riku was being an ass ( I understand his point of view, yet he was still a bit over the top) Leon was just plain irritating, Axel knows he is being selfish he even told Leon that yet he continues to press it (i was like just leave Axel alone >.
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Reviewed By: rinjinjin On: August 30, 2007 23:49 EDT
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kyaaa! come back roxas!! and bring smut!
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Reviewed By: rinjinjin On: August 28, 2007 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yooo! i read like the first 2 chapters of this on ff.net and was disappointed that there hadnt been more. im glad i found more on here, and im really glad to find at least one story where someone is actually writing a more or less in universe fic about aku finding roku and all that. thanks for the good read. i await the next update! impatiently! XD
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Reviewed By: Y On: August 17, 2007 06:07 EDT
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
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Title: :o
Reviewed By: Zaxel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 07:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing!!! I cant wait for more! ^^
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Title: OMG!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 05:52 EDT
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THAT WAS SIMPLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!it was DEFINITIVELY worth the wait!!! I was soo happy when Cid finally remembered i wanted to cry and then he and Vincent got back together AHH >.< SOO AMAZING and CUTE AND AHH!!! the interlude was great its so sad for Leon i hope he tells Cloud soon, Riku and Sora were adorable, and it sad sad for Roxas but at least he remembers/loves Axel too. WOW WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!! I was wondering when Sora and Riku would show up and now they have along with Roxas!!! They are finally together...well almost, now we just need to figure out how to get Roxas out of Sora (I wonder how they will do that hm...) I CAN'T WAIT until the next chapter!! Please update Soon!! As always the writing was simply magnificent and thanks for posting so much, i was so happy to see that you were back it felt like Christmas, the yaoi fangirl in me was going crazy! Great job on yet another update, I wait anxiously for the next chapter. Once again GREAT JOB!! your loyal reader anime_lover_kohaku
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Title: ^0^
Reviewed By: Zaxel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you do know you make me a happy person, right? X3 Awesome! I got a shoutout! Whoo! Well anyway, you wanted to know how you did so here it goes.... Your writing is only the best. There's nothing wrong I can say about it. I enjoy this fic and I always look forward to the next chapter. So... write more soon! I feel so bad for Vincent... and I feel even worse for the guys that stood at Gaia's Grotto... T_T Oh.. and one thing... I would love to see some Squeaon and Cloud.... X3 like... Axel witnessing how cute Leon gets when Cloud's around... :3 I just had the thought when Yuffie mentioned it.
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Reviewed By: kuro fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 20:19 EDT
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Great story. Very well written. And for the record, Vexen has green eyes.
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Title: WONDERFUL!
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful chapter. i really enjoyed it... imagining axel standing in the middle of the street getting O.o looks from people certainly made me laugh. Poor Vincent (you portrayed him perfectly as always).. him and his guilt-complex. I really do hope Cid will remember him soon, btw i loved how Cid was jealous it was so cute =^-^=. As usual lovely work keep it up! i wait anxiously for the next chapter (a month is terribly long but for such for such a wonderful story i am happy to wait) also thank you for the thanks at the beg of the chapter, it made me feel special lol. You can expect many reviews from me in the future as long as you keep writing, i love your work and it is truly a pleasure to read. please update your works soon! your faithful reader anime_lover_kohaku
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Title: Yay! An Update!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed last chp at AFF as Lynn Stardragon, but should I review here too? Anyway, this was yet another truly satisfying chapter, and I think it's both tragic and beautiful that everyone forgot about Vincent--as it would go far in explaining why he's not in the games (yet?). The blushing was cute, maybe slightly OOC--game-wise--but perfect here. Ah, and I like the insinuation that Cid retains some memories somewhere, and hope that he will be able to remember soon--or at least again. The only other things I have to say are, I love the characterizations for everyone, especially Merlin, as they are all distinct and dynamic (hee hee Squeon) people, and I enjoy the raw emotional press that Axel seems to be going through--the readjustment to both life and being 'whole' (not sure if human is the right word). It's interesting, and I sort of didn't really think about the necessary 'adapting to the change in situation time'. It just makes everything more...vivid. I almost think Axel could go nuts from being in so lively a world, save the fact Vincent is there to ground him. And I like that the redhead is attempting to return that favor--and kick his butt into gear. But mostly...I love how fair this story is. Yes, I wept for Reno. I will cry for Rude. But a sacrifice was needed as a catalyst to push Axel just far enough over the edge to get him to move. Which brings me to something I meant to comment on/ask from the last chapter: So Ax goes nuts--with grief--and uses a dark portal...in front of a large crowd of people. So if Saïx remembers, and happened to see that--heck, if any of the other former Nobodies happened to see that and started to remember--would he (or they) be willing to make a break for it with Xemnas? Sorry, just random thoughts. Once more, my hat is off to your work, and I shall be patiently awaiting the next griping installment of this tale--which maybe might possibly be a interlude (or three if they're small)?
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Reviewed By: mizaminer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 02:34 EDT
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just so you know, Axel is number 7, not 8. Otherwise, it's awsome
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