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| "Kazemaru and Miharu" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Hey, its me again
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating, I'm glad you haven't died! I was surprised to see you update, actually, it's really lucky that I checked my email (finally) and saw that you had. Best of luck finishing the story, I'm eager to see how this ends.
| Title: Thank you for the update!
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I love your writing. Although, in case you haven't realized yet, there are a ton of accented A's where you skipped lines, probably an error due to font choice, I've had that happen before in essays... Anyway, keep it up, I'm loving every moment of it.
| Title: 3 reviews in a row? Yay!
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wouldn't say your writing was atrocious! It merely wasn't worthy of 10/10 untill your later chapters =) I'm extremely glad I found this work when I did, I'm happy to be your first (3) comments. I hope more people notice this story soon, it deserves pages and pages of comments, not just a few of my crappy ones.
| Title: The out-of-order-ness confused me for a bit
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that I've peiced everything together in the right order, I'm here to leave an updated opinion. I haven't noticed a single error in spelling/grammar since my last review, so congratulations on your perfect 10s. I haven't got anything negative to say about the story. This writing is clearly on par with my other favorite authors, and this is possibly my favorite original story so far. Do continue sometime soon, I look forward to it. Also, if you repost this story in the correct order and the post count is reset, I will refresh the page 1,000 times so you have a decent view count again. I hereby name myself this story's first fan =)
| Title: Ohhh no reviews yet?
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only a few chapters in but I like it very much so far. Once I've read enough to comment on the story as a whole I'll write again. So far my only comment is that it's well-written. There are occassional, rare errors in spelling or word use but nothing that can take away from the impact of the story. I sincerely hope the rest of the story is the same.
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