| "Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Mamosere On: May 30, 2012 03:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a great story although it's so sad, you captured kagome's feeling of depression and you almost made me cry when she died, though i admit it seems out of character for Kagome to commit suicide since she has a strong personality. Well all in all i still enjoyed reading this story thank goodness you made a sequel of this because if not i'll probably would'nt enjoy reading this cause i hate reading story that has no happy ending. Thank you for such a good story. Im going to read the sequel next. |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 17:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you really captured Kagome's emotions very well. She has always had low confidence in herself when it came to Kikyou and it is easy for her to assume that he had gone back to her. Great job, now I'm off to read the sequel. Hopefully there will be a happy ending if Inuyasha's thoughts are anything to go by.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2010 01:10 EST
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You need to continue this. that's all I'm saying. ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 03:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice but sad story... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Title: go you, go you!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the third story i've read thats yours and god damn it to hell i'm addicted to your damn books! it was.... well its unexplainable really because you make me speechless when i read your books and again i did not grade you on wheater you spelled everthing right and that all the grammer is correct because i was to deep into the damn story to pay any heed to that so once again good luck with your writing and off to read more of your books! ^-^ P.S i'm kinda pissed that nobody will reveiw you when they read your books because they are really really good, i mean when people read mine i know they dont review me because mine suck ass, but you........ grr just gits on my nerves that people cant show people they like what you write i just think thats mean and i realized i did that too but i'm stoping that because the people that write great should know they do and you are one of those great writers! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Demonica On: October 18, 2006 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Seriously, WOW. You've managed to tackle the idea of suicide without overbearing angst and a pure and elegant grace. Your wordsmithing is utterly brilliant as well! Hope to read more from you! Well done :)
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Title: Ooh
Reviewed By: Sakua-chan On: September 20, 2006 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. I have to say, this is a different side of Kagome I didn't think I would be seeing. Good job on making her depression seem real! I noticed however, even though it was only minor, you slipped into present tense once in a while. It's not a bad, and I could still make sense of the story but try and stay in the tense you choose! (I do it too sometimes.) One more thing. If you're going for a darker approach, perhaps you should leave out the bit with Sesshoumaru owing him a favor. Ending the story upon Inuyasha discoering her death would have been excellent.
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Reviewed By: Trillian42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 17:00 EDT
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Sorry. Love your writing, love your stories. But I hate any fic that has Kagome committing suicide, especially over Inuyasha/Kikyo. It's an absurd notion, and completely out of character. Kagome is much too strong a young woman to do that, no matter how devistated she might be.
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Reviewed By: natthecat On: September 13, 2006 23:51 EDT
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Tell me you plan a second chapter. I know that he gets her back...but seriously...I need to read it to feel better about life. PLEASE!!!!!!
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Title: mel f
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i liked it. wouldnt mind if you made it an on going story to tell the truth. would like to know how kagome would act when sessy brought her back to life. anyway over all i really liked it.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: September 13, 2006 11:35 EDT
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Me likes, Me likes. I hope you continue on with story. And I love happy endings.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 10:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! I loved it. It was perfect.(sniffle!!)
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 13, 2006 09:28 EDT
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i paniced when i first read this. i thought 'nooo! she always gives me my dose of happy! how could she!' but you showed in this piece that no matter what the words or actions of inuyasha, kikyou is someone that kagome will always fear more important than her. i think even if inuyasha told her he wanted to talk to kikyou and tell her he chose kagome she would always wonder if all they did was talk. i love the song you chose and i'm glad for the happy(ish) ending. i'm happy that inuyasha didn't panic (i'd like to think that'll come after she's revived) and i have a feeling that the two will end up having a long talk about why she couldn't trust him after he was building them a home together. as always your work is some of my favorite and i always look forward to it.
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