Reviewed By:NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:26 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Keep going with this story. It is a good story, update soon.
Reviewed By:Milton [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 19:55 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: pretty goood on the first two chapters except that in the second one the left side is cut off....good start i like where this is going keep it up and update i think this might turn out to be a good fic