| "Captains" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 21:55 CDT
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so I've allowed for several months to pass (neglecting all the while to comment) and this story has not progressed one inch? Depressing situation. This is nively written, I like the way it is developing thus far, and the descriptions are beautiful :) I do hope this is not the end of this lovely story?
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Reviewed By: rquickle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please write more this is a very enjoyable fic. and I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 11:47 CST
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this is very interesting. i'm curious to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: davh On: November 06, 2006 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont usually review (lazy o.O) but I just had this urge to tell you how much I loved this =). I must say I have this thing for historical fiction and put in Heero and Duo and Pirates! Must I say more? You're really talented and I'd love to see more! Much More... please?
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Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!! Duo in a dress and then shouting like an angry woman. Now that is a sight to see. Duo the "butch princess" and WuFei the "annoying servant". Now that is something. God!! I was in a fit of laughter just reading about Duo all flustered and screaming yet seeming so "Shinigami-like". Please continue with more. I can't wait.
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Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a little intrigued by this. At first I thought it would be a little Pirates of the Caribbean-ish, but it doesn't seem too terribly similar. And Duo as a pirate captain = yum in my book ^^. Nice start, and I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: crazeme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting first chapter. But Relena and Duo??? I've enjoyed what I have read so far. Please keep going. Can't wait to find out how Heero reacts to Miss Winner when he is revealed. Very good story, I look forward to continue reading it. Kudos to you.
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Reviewed By: Kenai On: September 27, 2006 18:46 CDT
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I"m really impressed with what you have written so far. I didn't comment after the first chapter was published because i honestly didn't know that it was going to be continued. But good thing it is because I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Skeller-bvvt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 17:49 CDT
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Duo...pirate...yay ^-^ I would love it if Trowa was a pirate too...I suspect (however) he will be a military man. Alack. He'd fit the part so well. C'es la vive... This is lovely, though I got confused for a bit with what was going on. Don't worry, that's normal, I'm always confused. Update. Soon? PLEASE?
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Title: Captains
Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how Duo was portrayed and yet he still has this aura about him that's mysterious and foreboding. It's intersting. I can't wait for the update.
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Title: I'm intrigued
Reviewed By: VulpesVelox On: September 24, 2006 19:23 CDT
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Great start, please continue. So will Heero recognize the thief? Is Wufei also a pirate? And the governor- could it be Treize (making R. an 'adopted' daughter)? Is Une a crazy pirate-hunter (bounty-hunter)? One of the neatest things about AU is the freedom you have to re-imagine/re-invent the secondary characters...
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: September 22, 2006 21:37 CDT
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Not bad, and well worth the time reading. The whole "pirate" thing has been done before, but I haven't been lucky enough to find a well written one until now. True, the chapter is short, and ends right as it gets really interesting, but I'm afraid that anyone who's read what I've written will tell me to work on myself before I crit. too much. Anyways, lovely fic, and keep going. I understand how difficult writing can be, especially when you put time and effort into it and no-one acknowledges it.
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Reviewed By: Harutemu On: September 22, 2006 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good! I don't understand why there aren't a ton of other reviews yet. Meh, people here are to lazy I guess. I really like this fic, please update soon!
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