| "Risen" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 16:18 CDT
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Great story. Glad you had them talk it out and realize that everything was just misunderstandings. The flashbacks were a nice touch, added some background to the story. Poor Inuyasha didn't realize what he was doing wrong. Hopefully now everything will be alright and they'll talk to eachother if they're unsure of something.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful sequel... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:16 CDT
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Well i found this, then since its a sequel went back to find fallen. BOTH ARE FABULOUS! ^_^ But i dn have internet at home so actually i found them all using my friend pc then took them home, read them and came back to day to review like mad XD
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Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I love your stories! I really like how you played into them "Makeing love". It was realistic. it's not always like in the movies where they just for no real aparent reason have the feelings that go into real love makeing. Some time's it has to be asked for and I really liked that in your story. I'm waiting for your next chapter in mateing season! I've been reading it for a while. Brovo! You have real talent.
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked...scratch that, LOVED how you ended it! Good Job!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww. I was sad at first cuz u know the whole kagz dying but the ending nice! ^_^
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Title: @_@!!!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god, you do have a creative mind! you wanna trade? ^-^. that was absolutely terrific! that was very clever of you to show some flashbacks of how it was for Kagome and the part where Inuyasha realized he didn't tell Kagome he loved her, but then again ever thing i read that you wrote has been great!and i love how you got the lemon started and how Inuyasha realized there was another way. you are absolutely great! you have the most cleaver way with things, you really should become a writer! and again i did not pay attion to the mistakes if there was any because again your storys are so damn good! how do the hell, do you do that? and again i'm kinda pissed that you did not get the reveiws that you deserved, only four! what the hell is the matter wiht people? cant they see a great writer when they read something of theres! but this life is made up of some selfish people. good luck with the writing! ^-^
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: September 16, 2006 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a great fic, i loved it! well done!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(sniffle...sniffle) I'm so happy now. They both realize that they love and need each other...thye just needed to open up more. It was funny that Inuyasha didn't know any other positions...boy is he in for a surprise. LOVED IT!!!! (damn...need more tissues)
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 16:24 CDT
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yay, for happiness! i think that would be a major issue for kagome, holding everything inside until it built to where she just snapped. but to have the second chance showed both of them what they couldn't take for granted.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a little confusing because of all the flashbacks, but a good story.
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