| "A Place In Time" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: May 04, 2007 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is so beautiful. I hope that Sakura can get her memories back. Please continue soon
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Reviewed By: aneshakeren [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzzzzzzzzzzz dod continue
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Title: Isho's review. beware
Reviewed By: Princess Isho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. It's always enjoyable to read your things. You're a very talented writer, and explain thing very well to a certain degree. I do however, still see some grammatical errors, but hey, so do I in my own stories. I see where it looks like you may have tried a little bit too hard to explain something, when in fact it could have remained simple. The opposite could be said with some of your very simple descriptions. It's nothing bad enough at all to distract from the story. Really, it's only my nit-pickiness. The flashback was nice to add onto this chapter. It gave more to read, and it explained a bit about everything that I had questions about. I didn't feel like I was "in the dark", if you know what I mean. I hope that wasn't everything, because I would very much enjoy reading a little bit more about the past in a future chapter. Your interpretations of the characters are completely your own, and I admire that about your writing. They're not like the originals, but they are still as convincing as they would act like in another place and time. Did that make cense? My own writing can be hard to understand. Over all, the flow of the story went well without many bumps, and you must know I had a smile on my face from start to finish. I can't wait to read more from you. You keep me wanting more of this story. Good work, and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue i want more
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Teela Rose On: September 16, 2006 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do more...i want to know upto the ending
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Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: Lia Roe On: September 16, 2006 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASEEEEEEE CONTINUE......I M WAITINGGGG
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: dark_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love it pleasee continue i wanted to know stories like this i search everywhere now i find it. pleasee continue
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