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| "Forgotten..." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Kasia On: March 10, 2002 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i really liked your story, it is really good. and i was woundering, when will you post more because i would love to red some more. well if you want i could send you some of my stories, and maybe you could tell me what you think. E-mail me kora055@hotmail.com
thanks, i hope to read more.
kasia | Reviewed By: Angell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2001 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, its alright...but there is not much going on yet which doesn't lead me to rate it too well... | Reviewed By: Susan On: September 02, 2001 21:06 CDT
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So far, I have no idea what's going on. I'll wait 'til you have a bit more material. | Reviewed By: Su On: September 17, 2001 22:05 CDT
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Hmm, this was...well, I don't know why I reading this. I hardly know anything of Sailor Moon. I Fiore is a real character, how does she know Fibel? He's a newbie? How did they change data? Did they need to because there were a lot of people around or was the park empty? I mean, it was during the night, who wants to be there? Should people care if they know they're there? Raye lives in a temple? What was her Grandpa's offer? Who's Chad? Boyfriend, hmm? Or Raye wants him to be... Why did Fiore have a glass bottle? Well, I have a lot more questions, but this is way too much. |
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