| "Weapons of Old and New" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: smashling On: June 29, 2008 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn good storie don't stop!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 17:38 CDT
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COME ON AND UPDATE ALREADY and IF you actually do update please have Tenten get away or have somebody save her mainly Naruto ok so plese update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 00:57 CDT
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I thought those two new chapters were good I just hope that Tenten and her dad can get away and I really really hope that you pair Naruto up with Tenten and nobody else and why don`t you have Tenten`s dad not tell her that he knows Naruto oh well I cann`t wait till you update again I just hope it doesn`t take forever to update anyways keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 23:50 CDT
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Nice update. Keep the chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 22:25 CDT
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Come on and update the story please
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 18:26 CST
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I really like this story lol and Kakashi is a trip and I can`t wait til they get back to Konoda because I would love to see how Hinata,Ino,Tenten,Anko and Shizune see what they do around Naruto I just he isn`t actually gay if he is then that would rui this great story so please update soon please
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 21:12 CST
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I'm glad to hear Kyuubi will be making a more fight worth entrance I love Naruto Kyuubi'd out so to speak I think he looks even better when he is!! personally anyway good job looking forward to the next chap so update soon please and thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Inuyasha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone's been watching Batman Begins and it's obvious he liked Du Kar or should I say Rhas Al Ghul. I can't blame you I like the movie too. Also This was a great Chapter I like it a lot. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny. Very funny. Naruto is now a chick magnet. Awsomeness. Update soon. Got It? Good.
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Title: sweetness
Reviewed By: uzumaki urufu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude,that was freakin sweetness,and it was awsome,and great and nobody was ooc,ant it was freakawikid and really really REALLY!! good
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 18:15 CST
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CHapter 8 still doesn't work (though I can read most of Kyuubi's rant, I want to read it all) the rest does!! Thnks for that fix, and on top of that, thanks for the new chapter, more Naruto story based offf of Casino Royale, EH? Anyway, I like, can't wait to see the hotel seduction and chase scene, sespecially to the anatomy museum in downtown Miami. Heh, that would be amusing, especially, with Sakura still being down the river De Nile. Heh. Anyway, keep up the updates, later.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 00:14 CST
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Please repost chapters 8 onward, as they are out of alignment (for whatever reason) and the first word or two is lost on each line in this fic. I know this is something for a direct email, but this was the easiest method of posting for me. Personally, I love the fic, but if I can't reas it, it's useless! Please correct this issue, thanks.
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 21:12 CST
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I really needed this. thank you so much for writing such a great chapter
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Reviewed By: de de dee On: January 20, 2007 12:59 CST
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um....you did it again. its cut off. and chapter ten is still cut off. i love your story, but i can't read it. please fix.
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Reviewed By: de de dee On: January 17, 2007 15:14 CST
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first, very good story. i liked it a lot. I don't know if you noticed, but, the last chapter is cut off on the left side so i can't read the chapter. please fix. I really want to know what happened.
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