| "Angel of mine" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: REVIEW
Reviewed By: jemzet a broken heart angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ UPDATE SOON ITS A GOOD STORY
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Title: ^^ UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DRAMATIC ENDING DDUUNN DDDUUUNNN DDDDDUUUUNNNNN!!! LOL UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
The basic idea isn't too bad, perhaps the storyline would go smoother if you slowed it down, just a bit. Also, I have to agree with the other reviewer about spelling/grammar. That's a BIG part of it. "..beacon and pancakes with blue barriers.." There were a LOT of other spelling mistakes, and you should definitely fix that. But you definitely shouldn't just stop writing. Keep going, just keep in mind the spelling/grammar thing.
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey really good!!! update please!!
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Reviewed By: janomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey not bad but you might want to use spell check and those places that you have in grey are kinda hard to read hope u find this helpful
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