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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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really really nice... you have a very good idea... and honestly there really isnt a hotter triangle.. lol.. i hope to see Hiei grow closer to Kagome over time... but i love your start... very good... *
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Reviewed By: Cassial_Darkfox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was awesome! A truly unique and excellent story!!
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Reviewed By: FailTrying177 On: September 26, 2006 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this story is amazing - I hope to god you update soon and continue on! Please don't stop with this story - it's incredible!
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story line. I really enjoyed this chapter, I hope you continue it real soon. I can't wait to see how here relationship works out.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 23:59 CDT
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Yummy 3 some I quite enjoyed it. I liked that Enma liked Kagome that was a nice touch as he is so often shown as disliking everyone. I love seeing how you bring out Hiei's softer side. You do it so well its very sweet and makes his tortured past so pointed.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 15:55 CDT
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Lol. Great work1 Keep it up and update soon! :P
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 15:02 CDT
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Well, now, when the sex (no matter how awesome) is out of the way, the most interesting and the most difficult part of the relationships is about to start. The possibilities are endless... Will Hiei become real mate for Kagome? Will he learn, at least, to trust and to respect her? Will she fell in love with him? What about their relationships with Yusuke? Can't wait to read about this! Oh, and one more thing! Kagome is mated to Hiei, Yusuke is mated to Hiei, they are able to feel each other through him, but they aren't mated directly! I mean, it's a logical conclusion - because, otherwise, in order to mate with Hiei, it wouldn't be necessary for Kagome to have sex with him, Yusuke could be the one in the middle!^_~ So, did you overlooked this? Or you are planning to play this this little inconvenience to complicate everything in the later chapters? ^_~
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Reviewed By: Raizen(NLI) On: September 17, 2006 21:52 CDT
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That was awesome! though a bit short it was great!
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Title: To Give You Forever
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always love all of your stories; this one is no different. Please update soon! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 14:18 CDT
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Good, long and well-written chapter. BTW, I've never read H/K/Y treesome story, not even sure I saw the one... OK, hope ypu'll update soon. Cheers!^_^
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Reviewed By: vbzhd On: September 17, 2006 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story please write more
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Reviewed By: Zarisa On: September 17, 2006 12:16 CDT
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You've once again proved your amazing writing skills! Keep up the awwsomw work!! :)
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 09:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: September 17, 2006 06:30 CDT
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As always, you done a wonderful job. Never read a Kagome/Yusuke/Hiei, trio. Does this mean that the three of them are mates? Does that mean the three of them are connected? If so, Kagome is one hack of a lucky girl. Wonder how King Enma would react, since it was only suppose to be with Hiei and Kagome. Did it ever cross King Enma or Koenma that if Hiei and Kagome did mate and if Hiei falls in love with her, that if something did happen to Kagome, he losses control? (I hope that made sense) So if Yusuke/Kagome/Hiei are mates, that would double the chances of choas, if something happened to their mate(s), wouldn't it? How did King Enma feel about Kagome, before she agreed to being connected to Hiei? How does King Enma feel about Kagome being connected to Hiei and possibly to Yusuke as well? Did he love her or love her like a daughter. I'm sure he blames both Koenma and Yusuke for this. Please update ASAP. can't wait to find out what happens next. You just made my weekend special. THank you.
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Title: Holy shit
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, you have done it again! Another great story, and i crave more like this one! soo steamy and cool at the same time! I LOVED IT! ^_____^ *does happy dance* You are my all time favorite writer, i cant wait 2 read more of your work! LOVED IT!!! ^______________________________^ -Mitsuko
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