| "To Give You Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 20:43 CDT
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this was good, i wonder what king enma's reaction will be when he finds out that kagome mated both of them and how will her parents react?
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 13:07 CDT
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Oh please update soon!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH please update soon I would love to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: SilverDrache On: January 31, 2008 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never read this kinda idea before, but I really like it. This one-shot has extreme potential for a full story. Even if you decide not to use the enemies that all three of them have, after all the Shikon Jewel is still around, then you have the relationship itself to work with. They all have emotional scaring to work on, and I couldn't imagine that a three way relationship would be easy, although I don't know very many individuals who hasn't desired a three some. I really hope you decide to continue with this, it could be amazing.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original idea! I loved the image of Hiei on the chopping block and Kagome standing in front of him. For some reason, it brought to mind Pocahontas. Hehe Fantabulous threesome lemon! Some of your best writing!
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Reviewed By: HIME KAGOME 28 On: August 15, 2007 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I GOT FREAKING SCARED WHEN THE GUYS STARTED DOING THAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS OK THOU !
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon if it is not a one-shot.
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Reviewed By: Selene13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
verrrrrrrrrry nice i loved it and hope 2 c more hiei/kagome fluff with yusuke added in lol :)
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Reviewed By: Azera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 08:22 CST
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Very interesting! Good!
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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really really nice... you have a very good idea... and honestly there really isnt a hotter triangle.. lol.. i hope to see Hiei grow closer to Kagome over time... but i love your start... very good... *
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Reviewed By: Cassial_Darkfox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was awesome! A truly unique and excellent story!!
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Reviewed By: FailTrying177 On: September 26, 2006 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this story is amazing - I hope to god you update soon and continue on! Please don't stop with this story - it's incredible!
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story line. I really enjoyed this chapter, I hope you continue it real soon. I can't wait to see how here relationship works out.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 23:59 CDT
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Yummy 3 some I quite enjoyed it. I liked that Enma liked Kagome that was a nice touch as he is so often shown as disliking everyone. I love seeing how you bring out Hiei's softer side. You do it so well its very sweet and makes his tortured past so pointed.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 15:55 CDT
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Lol. Great work1 Keep it up and update soon! :P
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