Reviewed By: incognito On: September 14, 2002 18:39 CDT Comment/Review: Wow! You might think I'm a total sap, but your fic nearly made me cry! It's difficult to hold a reader's attention when you're writing an introspective, but this worked out really well. To me, it's a very balanced and honest interpretation of Akito's reaction to Gai's death - well written and touching. Keep up the good work! |