| "Love Thy Husband" Reviews/Comments [ 105 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheHowlersMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. A few spelling errors, but those are easily fixable. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: sesshysbebe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 23:37 CST
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wow, I loved chapter 6 (and all the others) please update again soon ^.^
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just...just....awsome that was good plz update soon
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 14:23 CST
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Great chapter! I loved it. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 11:25 CST
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You need a spell checker. Great story, but you make some annoying spelling errs. Please update soon though! Great chappy! ^_^
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: KagomeAkane [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice lemon in chapter 5! Make's me blush just thinking about it ^-^ Hehe well I hope that you'll update very soon I love your fanfic it's got a good story line! Much love, KagomeAkane
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: TheHowlersMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I just couldn't stop reading! I REALLY want more! Please...
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 10:37 CST
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You have me hooked already and it's absolutely amazing story, I love everything about it, you do have some misspellings and that I can understand. Well its getting hard for me to type, with my laptop on my stomach. Happy writings and a merry muse.
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry about the cat problem, but I completely understand. I have a Lil' Monster with a magnetic personality! Everytime he brushes up to the front of my tower the whole thing shuts down! I still haven't figured it out. It really sucks during online tests! Try to explain that to a professor! Anyway so far so good, I've been enjoying the the story. I like what you've done with Inu's mom. I get a distinct "Jennifer Tilly" vibe from her, it fits! As for grammatical errors, yes it can be frustrating to encounter when enjoying a fiction! However, somethings are petty! The grammer in this story is pretty good, I haven't cringed yet! I'm talking, "She wasn't feeling too good so he gave her something to feel more better cause she felt sick", and so forth! As for resources, dictionary.com is good and there are online translators that you can look up foreign words for free. Sometimes a Word program is helpful but I have seen serious flaws. If you have no one else to proof read, I wouldn't mind helping out. I'm not perfect, but I'm pretty good.
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Reviewed By: sesshysbebe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 23:06 CST
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Well, I've been follwing this since it started. And I have ONE thing to say...... MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! PLEASE!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 22:58 CST
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Fuck off xYour Last ChanceX, if you don't like my spelling, don't read it. I don't have any spellchecing software and I'm not exactly a fucking English Major! So Up Yours btw, anyone interested in being a proofreader for me?
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 18:05 CST
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I read the very begining, and I refuse to go on until you learn how to spell SAYONARA. I don't see an 'i' in there. If you don't know how to spell Japanese, then don't use it!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 17:48 CST
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Sessy the Chiropractor would be very amusing. Ooohhh, just think of all the bendy positinos he would know!!
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Title: HOTTNESS
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God that was SO GOOD! I want more ^^ I had to even tell my Friend and Boyfriend about this story lol. I havent read a fanfiction in like a couple of months and alot of other fanfics Ive read are either badly writen or are really boring...so for your story to excite me in just the first chapter is GREAT! And i love that your chapters are so long, I hate short chapters and people who dont update...So GREAT JOB and Keep it coming! >.< ::cough:: Now I think I have some Homework that i Put off to read this ::nervous laugh:: Oh well.
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Reviewed By: mspickalo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 16:03 CST
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i really like the idea, can't wait for the next chapter
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