| "Love Thy Husband" Reviews/Comments [ 105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 18:30 CST
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You had a few spelling and grammar errors- try to revise your work before posting. Other than that, it was a great story! It isn't really that cliche either ^__^ Please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow good story ur last lemon go me hot n botherd lmao. Hey you should hook up souta and kohaku. I kinda like that paring! ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 07:00 CST
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YES! They did it! Woohoo! I love the story, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:12 CST
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i'm so sorry everyone... i went ot upload one day and my floppy drive decided not to work. i WILL update ASAP
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~laughs hystericlly~ That was wonderful so far. I couldn't stop giggling but that might be because of my flu medicine!!! lol ok well cant wait till you update. byez
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 22:42 CST
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Y did u stop there!!! PLEASE updae soon
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Title: Chapters 1-4
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That drink was definitely some kind of aphrodisiac! ^^ Perhaps it even had Inuyasha's blood in it. ;) I do hope Kagome at least starts to like Inuyasha soon enough. She's awfully stubborn even though she knows she can't change anything. It's Inuyasha, for gawd's sake, he's HOT!!! Wth is wrong with her?? lol. I have to agree with her though, I hate the idea of arranged marriages, and I find it especially cruel that she wasn't told she was a part of one till like a week before she had to be married. Her family even let her fall in love with KOuga knowing she could never be with him. Not only is that particularly cruel but it seems sorta sadistic too, causing her all that pain and heartache. I understand why she's so reluctant to get involved with Inuyasha. This last chapter I noticed that she's at least warming up a little, holding his hand and all that. At least Inuyasha's feelings don't lie elsewhere. He seems completely smitten with Kagome. Carrying around her picture all this time...that was so sweet! At least he knew he had a fiance! I absolutely despise the idea of how "females" should be in Inutaisho's opinion a couple of chapters back. The way he described it I would have taken it the wrong way too! At least Inuyasha's not like that or Kagome's life would be a living nightmare. Sango's husband doesn't sound all that great either. Gawd, all I can say is that I hope Inuyasha and Kagome find happiness with and in one another! =)
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Reviewed By: Karen Angelica [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do love this story! You are very creative and imaginative! Please keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more! Please hurry...Oh wow...That sounds so hypocritic coming from a person who should update her own stories...LOL!!!!! Anyways, great work!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 09:22 CDT
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How could you leave us(me as well as the other readers) hanging? lol! Anyway, great chapter! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 15:15 CDT
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Dont worry ladigeri, Sango and Miroku will shack up, a lot, eventually. (I'm a big MirokuxSango fan as well) ^.^
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 15:11 CDT
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Great story!!! I'm just alittle disappointed that Sango is already married (I'm a big Miroku/Sango fan). Atleast Kagome and InuYasha are married...lol. Know where I can find some of that wine they're drinking? LMAO
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 12:56 CDT
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I love the story... and no I'm alittle naive I don't really know what the drink was. Update soon!
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Title: midnight-vampire66
Reviewed By: midnight-vampire66 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 04:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEXT CHAPPIE.........YAY..................UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animegoddess9484 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 00:33 CDT
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I loved it ~o come on~ UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: sesshysbebe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I LOVE IT!!! It's amazing :: Amother fangirl squeal :: :) sooo happy ^.^
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