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| "Into The Well" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Glad to see you updated! ^^ I'm happy you delved into Takeshi more and even showed some of his past. There was a definite link between Inuyasha and Takeshi, which was cool to see. Sad though in a way because if Takeshi is Inuyasha's reincarnation then that means he has to die. =( Oh gawd, I hope somehow, someway that Takeshi has the ears! Who wouldn't want them?? Kagome does. ;) Not to mention his cute Inu habits. Then again, there were hints that he does such as the fact that he's extremely good in athletics and such. It'll be interesting to see how it all turns out. I look forward to your next chapter.
| Title: Quite interesting
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Takeshi certainly is shrouded in an air of mystery. At first I thought he might be Inuyasha's reincarnation but if Inu and Kags get together and become intimate that'll just be way too weird. Especially since Inu realized that he never loved Kikyo the way he loves Kagome. There are a lot of allusions thought to the possibility of him being Inu's reincarnation, such as the way his eyes look older than he is and stuff like that. I hope he is Inuyasha's reincarnation but I wonder if he'll still be half demon, full demon, or human? I mean, if he's just human I'll miss those precious ears of his, as will Kagome! ^^ Shin definitely reminds me of Miroku, lol. You seem to be skipping right along in the story though while poor Takeshi just sat in the hospital for six months wasting away. I feel really bad for him if he is Inu's reincarnation, being neglected by Kagome. I hope we see more of Takeshi's side of the story soon. I was happy though to see Inuyasha's change of mind as well as his demon side's appearance. Kagome's obviously in love with him. I still feel bad for Takeshi. Here's to hoping you update soon so we can find out what happened to the poor guy.
| Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to say that this is a good story line. I think it's creative, but also reminds me of another anime.
| Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just found your story and it's great. I like the new characters Takeshin and Shin. Are they the reincarnation of Inuyasha and Mirkou? I can't wait till the next chapter.
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