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| "Insane Intentions" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 17:39 CDT
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very interesting.....how did sesshomaru get his arm back, i wonder....anyway, not a huge fan of this pairing, and I thought it was weird you shoved sango and inuyasha together, of all pairings, but then again, Kagome and Sexxhomaru are just as unlikely....
| Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Theoretically this story could easily become more than a one shot. Frankly I'd love to see it become that. After all, there's 500 years of history between her and the two demons that have not been caught up on. Especially the recent history to show how they all got to that one place in time that showed them all meeting within that short and easily missed period of time. Keep writing. DD
| Reviewed By: elexia On: April 21, 2007 09:44 CDT
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needs more really good
| Reviewed By: Anonymous Critic On: September 25, 2006 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this one-shot. Very very unique. You wrote with enough dialogue and description, it's hard to find anyone like that these days. It's all about dialogue to them. So awesome job. You need to revise this just a bit for simple grammatical and spelling errors. None were serious, just simple ones. This is very creative, you have an amazing imagination to think of this type of plot. Yes, I have heard of Sesshomaru Taisho before and him being a businessman, but! Nothing for a psych ward and stuff like that. So once again, awesome job! I enjoyed it! And I have to say, the lemon was great. A lot of people these days just rush right through the whole thing, but you put time and effort into it. When I was reading it, I felt the frustration, love, lust, everything. It really amazed me. The ending made me smile as well. I was never a fan of KagomexSesshomaru pairings, but when I read something as good as this fic, it makes me forget I don't like the pairing. Love, love, love it!
| Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 18:48 CDT
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Inuyashas an Sango...interesting
| Reviewed By: musheesuh On: September 19, 2006 21:08 CDT
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LOOOOOOOOOVED your story and it's psychiatric twist! please don't tell me that's the ending. i can't wait for a future chapter? :]
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