| "A New Life" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Son Faith no Oujo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! She's pregnant isnt she?! The part when Vegeta wrapped his tail around a 5 inch tall Helena was cute! For some reason that reminds me of Lion King....yeah I'm weird! ^^ Sorry I havent reviewed lately my computer's been acting stupid. *glares at her computer*
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story id good, but kinda abrupt and fragmented. I'll keep reading and see how you deveop the entire plot and how you develop as a writer.
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Reviewed By: Son Faith no Oujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw and here I thought they were going to go back to her original world. Oh well *shrug* I wonder when in the Inuyasha world they arrived in. Lol Can wait until they meet Miroku and he asks that famous question *giggle*
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Reviewed By: Son Faith no Oujo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice although the chapters are rather short. I look forward to the next chapter! ^^
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