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Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 18:57 CDT
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This fic has great grammar, and you even spell checked it to make sure it was the best it could be, which is wonderful. Really, my only issue is the plot. Saskue had sex with Naruto, which is fun and great, but he had sex with Naruto while Naruto had a DEEP, MASSIVE chest wound! It was so bad that Naruto passed out on the ground and didn't wake up after being handled by Sasuke and Itachi! He was pale, cold, covered in blood, and partially unconcious, and Sasuke had sex with him anyway? He took worse damage during the show and was given a feild treatment by Sasuke, Itachi, or Sakura, and managed to never be pratically molested! The fic writing was amazing, I'll grant that, but frankly I must ask...What the hell?

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