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| "Unexpected Ending" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 19:24 CST
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awww....that's so sad! I'm on the verge of tears! Very good! Now I'm in the mood to write something angsty!
| Title: Reminds me
Reviewed By: Sheik898 On: December 08, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sad yet it may remind you of your own freinds and make you happy great writer i rocomend her writings big time
| Title: ooo!
Reviewed By: Moghedian [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 15:55 CST
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I'm a sucker for tragic stories
| Reviewed By: acorn On: November 30, 2006 20:52 CST
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hrrrrrrrrrm, very angsty. mwahahahahaha!
| Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 22:22 CDT
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That was so fricking SAD! Stupid Sasuke. No offense. You really know how to make your readers feel like they are there. When i was reading it, i saw Naruto on the ground with bloodly cuts and Sasuke dead. now i think about it. Sakura is like a sister to Naruto, Sasuke is like a brother to Naruto, the third was like a great grandfather, Tsunade was like a grandmom, ero-sennin was like a perverted granddad, Iruka was like a father, Kakashi was like a lazy and late uncle. funny how Konoha can see like a huge family.
| Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I am actually crying!! That was f-ing sad, yet happy! OMG, I feel so depressed now, yet so happy! You really know how to write, and capture a reader. I am picky when it comes to reading something, but my goodness. That really moved me, and got me going.
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