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Title: Inu_Fan3006
Reviewed By: Inu_Fan3006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2010 11:08 CDT
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It's amazing how much I have matured since my last review! But I'm really sad to see that you have never updated after 3 years. Its even better the second time I might add. I can't help but wonder if you have this completed on another site.. I really wish I could finish it!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 05:03 CDT
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Hi!!! I started reading this on AFF, but saw the begins of part two on here. This story is awesome and the start of pt.2 sound worth while, are you ever gonna come and finsh it? It would be really nice if you did.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 17:55 CDT
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Hmmm, it's an awesome story to reread, but a chapter is missing, the one where Naruto and Sasuke get attacked and sent over the cliff. Beyond that, the storyt rocks hard, so why not update it? It's got a small, but VERY sure following. Plus, awesome sex! Anyway, continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 19:34 CDT
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keep going with part two. I loved the first one and I know I'll love the second, just plz keep writing, I'm getting a little anxious to know whats gonna happen
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Reviewed By: Inu_Fan3006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NOES!!!! ITS BEEN MOUNTHS!!! WILL YOU EVER UP DATE AGAIN?? IT WOULD BE AUSOME IF YOU DID!!!!!!! WELL HOPES YOU UPDATE SOON!!!!! I LOVE THE STORY!!!! 1 oh and p.s. you have been compolemented by the complement fairy...me!! pss. i cant spell!! psss you are an ausome auther!!!
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Title: YOSH!
Reviewed By: disturbed_mediocrity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Such a fantastic story!!! I'm usually a strict Gaa/Saku type person, but, dammit, this story made me like Gaa/Naru and Saku/Kanky. Best line ever: "Your dick has a date with a snowman!" *Insert fangirl squeal* Also, love all the steamy yoai. ^_^ I really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 06:47 CDT
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Yay Hot Sand 2. That's going to be great. The pairings specially Kakashi/Sasuke really sound good! I'm rerally happy that Naruto/ Gaara are happy their kids sound so cute!!I can;t wait for the next Chapter.
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Reviewed By: animebarb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughtly enjoyed this story. You are a very skilled and your story is complex and interesting. Looking forward to the ones to follow. Thank you for all your hard work and write more soon.
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Title: T.T
Reviewed By: HowlingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God! Why????!!!!! Why did it have to end! T.T Not fair!! This was one of the best stories I've ever read and I hope you keep making more like this!! I absolutely love Gaara and Naruto fics! They are the best pairing ever!! I can't wait for the epilogue and continuations, so I'll be avidly awaiting their arrival! I plan on putting up my own Naruto/Gaara fics as well, so I hope you'd read them! After all, you're an expert at it! So until then, I will be waiting! You rock! Ja! XD
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Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that story was amazing....AMAZING i loved it i laughed so hard and i even teared up a little. i hope you have sequals.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was *tear* one of the *sniffle* best not really endings ever!!! I'm so glad that Naruto and Gaara will live happily ever after. This was the best story that I have read up to now. I just want to... thank you for putting all of your effort into this and making it so enjoyable... for all us fans. *breaks out in tears* THANK YOU!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 04:07 CST
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Hey, it's a start to an end, plain and simple. What, you think any story is ever truly over? Hell no, the story of destiny won't even end after the end of the universe, it still goes on, even after existence dies, plain and simple. So, with that note, please continue to write hot gaara on naruto sex (damn that's hot!)
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Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 02:05 CST
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Loving it more with each chapter.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 19:46 CST
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Ahhhhhhhhh. It's so sweet and cuddly. I feel so happy that Gaara forgave Naruto and that Sasuke is willing to move on from Naruto. I really just want kakashi to be happy and for sasuke to be happy as well. I loved this chapter sooo much!
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Title: Best Ever!!!
Reviewed By: HowlingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This rocks! I loved every second of it! U are the best at this! So please keep it coming and I hope that Sasuke and Kakashi get together soon or the Uchiha is going to commit suicide soon! Anyway, having Naruto almost die was sad...but at least he lives! But I really want Naruto and Gaara, one or both to be able to get pregs...that would sooooo kick ass! Anyway, I can't wait for the next update, so until then...Ja Ne!
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