| "Fight or Flight" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Stina On: April 10, 2011 01:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good beginning! So far, the Fake fanfics I've found on this site have not been very well thought through or planned. You seem to have thought about your plot, and you have a good hand with the language. Thank you for writing! |
Title: shikarinakshatra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Raven Black [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 13:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh. sorry that i've been gone. I'm a new mommy and we're fixing to move soon. And then I forgot my login and password...soo sorry. But I didn't forget about you. Poor Dee. Is he like a supernatural hot spot all on his own? Can't wait to figure out what the mist did to him. All Dean wants to do is leave and he can't seem to get to. A little funny. bet he's really frustrated. I love Mother Maria. She's one of my favorite. If it would have been me I would have cuffed Ryo on the back of the head for him thinking that not talking about it will make it go away. Fabulous as always and i can't wait for more!!
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Title: shikarinakshatra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Raven Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 11:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehe Dee called them Buffy. That was great! Loved them talking about creepy Rose. I know I'd shiver. Lousy vampires blowing up the two D boys. ;;pouts;; I hope they're ok. :'( As enjoyable as always and I can't wait for more. Sorry I didn't review earlier. Baby's are very demanding I'm finding out. hehehe
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Title: shikarinakshatra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Raven Black [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No worries. I don't really feel sorry for Rose. The 'man' (use the tearm lightly) does deserve everthing he gets. Dee and Dean fighting is great. Way to much alike those too. Only dialogue is cool and at times nessesary. i enjoyed reading about them just talking. And Dean getting pushed in front of J.J. was pretty hillarious. Can't wait for more.
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Title: shikarinakshatra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Raven Black [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so the two dynamic duo's finally meet. figures Dee and Dean would bump heads a little bit. I don't know who to feel sorry for more. Rose, for all the stuff he's going to hear or the boys for having to get him to believe them. hehe hope they at least get a few jabs at Rose in. I don't like that man either. As enjoyable as always and i can't wait for more.
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Title: shikarinakshatra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Raven Black [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!!! Dee's back. Ryo kissed him in Rose's office...in front of Rose!!! Way to go Ryo!!! That's how you play your guitar on the M.T.V.!! I'm really loving this story. And it's ok about the teasing. That's what keeps me coming back for more. That and I'm totaly hooked on the story line. Can't wait to see what the 4 of them do when they finally get together. I can't wait for more!!
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Title: shikarinakshatra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Raven Black [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 11:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
oooo can't wait for more! That's such a tease! love Fake and Supernatural. I'm excited to see where this story goes. Hope you update soon!
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Title: firgodes7@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: September 22, 2006 21:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
I am looking forward to seeing what the next chapter will be like. I hope to see you update with a new chapter soon.
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