| "To Be Just Like Daddy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: great job
Reviewed By: winter silhouette [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so cute *wipes tears away..sniff sniff* i enjoyed it. ^_~. you keep up the good work one spelling correction(have no rooom to talk i make spelling mistakes all the time) where you put curios (i think its what you put) its spelled curious. probibly just a type-o. No major flaw though. I loved it well farewell ( look closely there is probibly a type-o in this review!!!) well i cant quit typing and i really dont know why ooohhhhhh thanks for the reviews.
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 16:39 CST
Comment/Review:
grammar's a little off. but other than that, very cute
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 13:53 CST
Comment/Review:
This was very cute. The only thing I have to say really is that "are" should have been "our". ^_^ In any case, I adored it. I got your review and I've always been interested in other works. I'm going to check out your other stories now.
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