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| "Support" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: mystic_manor On: December 26, 2006 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it!! everything was awesome. update asap!
| Reviewed By: Org666 On: September 28, 2006 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good! And very interesting. There's just one thing that bothers me: you say that the organization's headquarters is Castle Oblivion, but their base of operation is actually the Castle that Never was, in the World that Never Was. They were just conducting experiments in Castle Oblivion, and only six members ever went there. Other than that, keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Bluedrake On: September 28, 2006 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Your writing style is absolutely terrific, and your characterization is mostly spot-on. One might argue that Axel is a tiny little bit OOC, but it's very minor. Demyx, however, is as accurate as I've ever seen him outside of the game (the pillow episode had me laughing out loud). I can't tell you how hard it is to find a fanfic that is actually well-written, especially a yaoi one! And yours is very very good and well-written. Keep up the good work and update soon, or you will have my becoming insane on your conscience.
| Reviewed By: Lumina Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 20:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooh... I can't wait to see what happens next! Update quickly!
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