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Reviewed By: quatre n takato are te best [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: egamtaerg [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
rally interesting but it would hav been funnier if kyuubi was put into something else like a shoe or something
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is so damn awesome I can't put it in words. Too bad that you won't post the continuation on this site, but I already signed up on fanfiction.net to see how your story will go on ^^
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Title: WEAPON!!!
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have so many different forms of weaponry in that treasurey you could probably give Sasuke and Hinata a weapon as a symbol of frienship, or something more in Hinata's case. Hell you could probably give Gaara one and have him go through the same ordeal to allow him to sleep. Mace, sword and claw, speed, skill and power, definately a good way to balance out the team. Besides, if Sasuke ends up getting a weapon that chooses him as its wielder he would have to make a choice if Orochimaru puts the heaven curse seal on his neck, either risk everything and discard the weapon to gain the power of the level-2 curse seal or remain and train in Konoha while wielding a magnificent weapon that would benefit him greatly and maybe even bring him closer to his goal than he could ever hope going to Orochimaru. He'd be relying on power that was his own, there would be no big loss if he chose his friend and Konoha. I don't want Sasuke to defect if you can't tell. I am seriously hoping for more. If you want to contact me my FF.net account is Anime Insaniac.
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, I really like it ^^
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Reviewed By: The_Hybrid02 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it... Do you needed anything more than that?? I only wish you would up date more.. LOL look at me "the pot" calling the kettel black
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Reviewed By: Ecchi-Anbu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 01:13 CST
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CONCLUSION?!?!? You haven't even had any sex in the fic yet!!! Youput down that one of the catagories was Hentai, I'm not seeing it!
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 14:22 CST
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Very filling, and I know what its like unable to have internet access. I can't even get to my computer to continue my stories. I can't wait to read the next chapter, when I can get back on the net. Till that time, keep up the good work. tora
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: goodygurrl2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is really good plz update sooooonnnnnn!!!!!11 it different from anything i have ever read!
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 22:59 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY! Hinata isn't a bitch anymore! That makes me happy, cause shes one of my favorite characters. Please update soon! I can't wait for more.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 20:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Hinata is a bitch. I'm not so sure I like her. But somehow Sasuke doesn't seem like the little emo jerk from the show that I despise. I'm liking this story. Naruto's character is very similar but now the laid-back personality is real and not a mask. I happen to love this team arrangement. Sakura is too... whiney. Ino, too. I can't wait to continue reading.
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Reviewed By: samster On: November 25, 2006 09:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story and i have a idea, hinata is fihgting her sister with dad watching but naruto is there this make's hinata not want to mess up and show's her true skill and kicked her sister's ass her father sees this and knows it was naruto and makes a arenged marriage for them when they turn 16. if u like it totally use it i don't mind one bit.
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Reviewed By: PraecepsUK On: November 10, 2006 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, the grammar could use a little work but the rest makes up for it, well you got me hooked so update soon plz! :D
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 13:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Hinata's move was really cool to me, and I totally agree. Akatsuki's motive ahem . . . sucks balls . . . anyway! Great chapter! Loved it! I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work, and again, love how you got the characters in this story too. It's awesome!
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Reviewed By: gau ban [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good can't wait for more
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