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| "The Clone" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: toratsume(not logged in) On: October 21, 2006 11:44 CDT
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Now we continue to travel deeper into the storys plot. The teams first kills . . . I like how you done this chapter. Personally I never really thought about how them killing for the first time, or the team killing others, would affect them. As ninja, it was simply something to be expected, behing that it was part of their duty as a ninja, I guess. I think you really captured the thoughts and emotions of what would be going through their minds, for their first kills. Makes me kinda wonder what it would be like if this ninja world was real, and plain people like us where ninja, with awesome chakra inforced power, could actually become a ninja to be used as a tool. Kinda gives me the creeps . . . Boy I'm glad that I didn't join the army when I turned eighteen. i don't think I could have killed another person, then again, I guess it would have to depend on the situation. Gees, that's starting to creep me out now. ninja, army, >shivers< Great chapter. I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Toratsume
| Reviewed By: Kuro aKki Fuzen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 09:59 CDT
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yay^^ i loves this fic. keep it up
| Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 15:54 CDT
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Another great chapter. I can't wait to read on what happens next. I know how it is to not be able to update, so don't worry about it. School is more important anyway. Just as long as you do evetually update now and then, I'll be happy! Love the story, can't wait for more, and I will be patient for more to come.
| Title: Right! Jutsu names!
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 17:27 CDT
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ok, i know the shadow clone is Kage Bushin No Jutsu ( duh >.
| Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome! really enjoying this story pls update soon
| Reviewed By: toratsume(not logged in) On: October 07, 2006 11:18 CDT
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I don't understand what the hell is wrong with people, really!! If you read something and you like it or have a freaking opinion, WRITE A FREAKEN REVIEW!! I swear, it's one of my pet peeves. I have two storys, that I personally think are kinda good, though the grammer and spelling is crap, but deserve more reviews than they have. Just like this story does here. I don't get it really. I am the only sane person I guess, who is willing to leave a review, and actually say 'I like this story'! Point blank. Gees, I'm going to get pounded now, but I don't care. Reveiws make the writer want to keep going, and make the story worth writing. Now that I am done literally bitching I will get to my review. I like how you have the charaters going in the story, and are making Naruto not to be the idiot like he usually is put out to be (even though all the smart people know that he is really a genius in disguise lol)I can't wait until your next chapter!! And the cliffy . . . it makes it all the more suspenceful for me! I'm getting hyped up now, so please update again soon!! I have no opinions on the story, 'cause I think that you are doing great. I'm a picky reader, trust me. Your story has me caught wanting to read more, so keep up the good work. toratsume
| Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 20:19 CDT
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Another great chapter!! I really enjoy this story!! Please update again soon!
| Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 00:06 CDT
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I was a good chapter. Can't wait until the update! Now, with that, I am going to bed now.
| Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hinata kinda stuck up, Sasuke still stuck up, Naruto stronger then he looks . . . Muhahahahah! I smell a good story brewing. Evil cliffy though, you evil author! I can't wait until the next update!! Story on my fav's list!!
| Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. I really want to know what is going to happen next. Please continue!
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