Reviewed By:Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 01:10 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: Never Never Never put you can't write a summary in your summary. It's like suicide for any fanfic writer. If you can't summarize your own story why would a reader want to waist time reading it? In this case it really is a waste that so many people passed over it. It was a pretty decent fic. It was a little cliche at points and your style of writing is weak but overall it was good.