| "Story of Fallen Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey long chapters are are a GODSEND! readers love them! and pwhoar...kinky!!!! :) i neva imagined lucifer to be so cute and such a shorty. waaah there was no gabe! oh well im sure in the NEXT CHAPTER which u are writing EXACTLY AT THIS MOMENT i am sure will have a whole merry bundle of him.tallyhooo my eyes burn from lack of sleep. plez update soon.cheers
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Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok me liked it.yep. but it seemed a little bit rushed in chapter five. the guy was so willing to just let gabe live with him, and there would have been a long process legally to get him to live with him in the first place. i get that no one wants to read about all that jazz, but still it came a bit unexpectedly, like BAM - come live with me totall suicidal stranger!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm i dunno , i think i understand the it, but then i dont. i just think thst everything was blown way outs proportion, and god was bloody useless. and that the characters did not seem THAT torn up about gabe having to eternally leave heaven. oh wait it did say they dont experience human emotions as such.hmmmmm. but hey i still enjoyed chapter 4. and im excited to read the rest, which i will do right now.
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Title: oh noeeees
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh nooooooo poor gabe!!! for a second i thought mr death man guy (cant spell his name) was gonna be gabes hot love interest. booyaka! ...yet alas he is just an evil jerk who cant get laid.sigh. LOVED CHAPTER THREE!. MUST KEEP GOING!
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Title: ahhhh i loved it
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o was expecting the flashback to be boring, but ALAS! IT WAS fantastic! could gabe be any cuter? and raph was so bloody nice! shit i wonder how on earth gabe could ever be a fallen angel, he just oozes out goodness. hmmmm. god please send me a miracle and make this writer update in the next ten minutes. sniff
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Title: well done! wohoo??
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o god, i love this story, but i hate that i love it since u have not updated for like a year/ oH GOD! why do i do this to myself?!!!!!! anyway i love the concept and i fell really bad for gabby. i also like how its not at all sugar coated, and ur also a g00000000D writer. great job! review this damn story u lazy poohs out there!!!
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Title: Angels
Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
meep ^_^ I love this story, you must continue it! It made me cry.. It was really good! Don't let my name fool you. I really love angels. Gabriel is so amazingly loveable. I felt such protectivness for him at the very beginning. Azreal... dear lord I fell in love with him.. Overall, I really like so please update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: TheLostRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really interesting. I like the concept very much. ^^ Update soon please. ^^ ~Almira
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