| "The Meeting Then Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Sexy Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I was enjoing that! Why didn't ya finish it? It was good! I hope it's not too late! I'm, it's been like two years? Anyway! If ya had finish the fic, can ya e-mail it to me? yeni_00@yahoo.com! I will be a happy woman!
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
vegeta is just so stubborn. He needs to let someone help him and not wollow in his own self pity. i hope goku is able to help him. Update soon, this is a great story.
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like how you explain the saiyan mating cycle, very imaginative. i hope there's some goku/vegeta love before this story runs out of chapters. Next chapter.
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
please make vegeta the uke. it seems like thats the direction your going but i still hope he's the uke. even if he isn't its still a good story. Ok next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 13:56 CDT
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its so cool how you made vegeta and goku mimic each other. Saiyans probably have some type of mating ritaul. Oh and i like how affectionate goku is with his son, they seem close. good chapter. time to read the next. i'm trying to review each one since people don't review much.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 13:47 CDT
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chapter 1 was great. I liked how you made vegeta and goku purr, they probably looked so cute together. great story so far, time to the rest.
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I am so loving this. Youve got a few grammatical errors goin but not enough to turn me off ya know. Anyhoo, Im really liking where this is goin, so please update soon and keep up the good work
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: Vegetas4Life06 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for your first story i would have to say that it was a very good start to the story. i hope you continue and ill be reading it if you do. :D
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