| "The Truth about Cats and Dogs" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Confused
Reviewed By: wolfman05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2013 02:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
I read this story a long time ago and enjoyed it but now something entirely different is here. Where did the story go and can you put it back up again? |
Reviewed By: Tonfa On: June 28, 2007 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like seeing Inuyasha and Kirara lemons. There's too much Shippo and Kirara as it is now and he's only a child. Kirara I'm sure she would be considered adult. People have different opinions on beastiality. I don't consider this beastiality since Kirara isn't just some animal. She can think and understand human language just like anyone can. I'm glad you didn't use some fake human form of her.
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Reviewed By: Inuheartskagalot On: May 18, 2007 17:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm..as sick and wrong as that was it was a good lemon...and there aren't enough kirara lemons..but nexted time make her human or sometihng..beastyality is alittle sick!
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Reviewed By: Jackon On: January 12, 2007 20:25 EST
Comment/Review:
hey if you ever have time maby you could make a segwil or something? or another with shippo! sry cant stop asking :(
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Title: Very creative.
Reviewed By: Da_Dogs_Bytch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story even though it went places most don't usually go. It was well written, and to me, very funny. I don't rate on grammar and so on because I'm not an english teacher. But I will rate on other areas. I also don't get squeamish when it comes to "unusual" pairings especially if it's as fun as this one was. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Jackon On: October 06, 2006 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great I always wanted to so a kilala lemon! with her not human by the way and I would have loved it if you hade shipo instead plz make a shipo/kilala i would love to see that!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kitsuneyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 09:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, Though i greatly prefer shippo & kirara. I'm mostly glad you had kirara as she really is and not some fake humanoid version of her. I would love to see a shippo & kirara story writen by you =^_^=.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agreed, there just isn't enough Kilala stories, but she's kinda a cat, so this is practically beastiality. You could have at leat made her have a human form for this, then it would be okay.
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