| "The Sunflower Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mary Lou On: March 04, 2013 02:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was amazing and beautiful. This had all of the elements of a good story. Romance, humor, and a plot. I had figured that Jin would die, but you never mentioned what happened to Mugen. |
Reviewed By: MoonVeil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2011 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hate to cry...but this story was so worth the tears. |
Reviewed By: Jasu On: January 18, 2008 01:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fantastic. One of those rare gems that are so perfect it shines. :)
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Title: the sunflower princess
Reviewed By: marokaro On: October 09, 2007 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so beautiful, so sad, and so sweet, i just couldn't stop crying. i love the way you wrote it: the foreshadowing, the consistency and use of key phrases throughout the story. it just melded together so perfectly and had this dream like feel because of the story within the story. i also enjoyed reading from the perspective of Himawari, the words fit so well and gave just the right atmosphere and flow. I hope you keep writing, i truly admire your writing.
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Reviewed By: Odi et amo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 07:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* That was absolutely wonderful. You're writing flowed so nicely and had such lovely depth to it.
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Reviewed By: Yushi-chan On: April 13, 2007 23:21 EDT
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*cry* That was so beautiful.... You make such lovely tragedies... And yet, they aren't tragic, but sad and hopeful at the same time... *sob* The kind of stories that are bittersweet. I love that kind of story... *sniff, sniff* (And, here I am, still crying... ;P) T.T
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Reviewed By: Scratches On: March 18, 2007 21:22 EDT
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I swear I feel like a cry baby. Every one around me kept whispering things like "what is she doing?" or "why is she crying now?" Well im telling alot of people about this, I know some need to read this. Thank you for writing this! ja
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Reviewed By: Karashii On: January 14, 2007 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read sweet nothings at fanfiction.com and here a few times.. and its a tear jerker everytime I read it. You are a very talented writer to write something so sweet and angasty at once. I believe you have portrayed Jin really well. I hope you continue to write this wonderful fan fictions.
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Title: TT^TT
Reviewed By: ravyn09 On: December 30, 2006 23:57 EST
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OMG! I read sweet nothings, blubbered like a baby, composed myself a bit, then read the oneshot sequel.....and started blubbering all over again. You are a natural tear jerking author. Keep up the good work, and warn me next time that I'm going to need a box of tissues ok? Absolutly beautiful. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: MelissaRose On: November 29, 2006 03:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried when Fuu died (my boyfriend came home from work and I was surrounded by tissue and he thought someone had died!) and I cried again when Jin died. Simply beautiful.
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Reviewed By: 'Nes On: November 25, 2006 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write about Satoru! O loved this fic and Sweet Nothings, and hope you write another soon. On another note, you always make me cry, which is very hard to do.(Means your a great writer!) Well hmmm...that's all I can say, It's been a pleasure
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:57 EST
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oi. I'm all sad now. sigh. Well written, as usual, and interesting. Well thought-out and stuff. ... I'm going to go find a tissue now. I can see why you would feel drained after writting that.
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: kytenluvinu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Sweet Nothings a while ago and didn't review, I suck because that story made me cry and I love Jin/Fuu pairings. And then I read this story and it brought back those 'Sweet' tears I think I'm going to review for that now. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more from you.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 10:38 EDT
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God I cried again just like in sweet nothings. I love the way you ended the story. It was sad but very romantic and sweet. It only makes me wish that love was actually that undying and true. too bad today its not. Like always I enjoyed readying your fic you are a very talented writer with a very authentic imagination. I can't wait till you have the energy to write the next. take care PEACE!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 20:50 EDT
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Awwwww......that was so sweet and sad. But i loved it. It made me want to cry. But i understand what you mean when you say it finishes their story. It was great! And i loved the way you wrote it! I think it was a nice happily ever after, and i think you caught Jin perfectly. He seemed like the Jin in Sweet Nothings, except older, which i guess was your intent, huh? Sorry for going on and gushing like this, but your stories were the first ones i ever read, and i just thought you were the greatest writer i had ever read. I still do. Please keep writing and drawing. You're so good at it!
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