| "River's of Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: anime'yaoi'nurse [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
gah!! fuckin cliff hanger!!!! i hate u! jk,jk, im just sick. physically and metally. ^^ i rly love this story, plz plz plz update soon! (i rly didnt mean that i hate u, just a lil bored and tired. and i like to mess with pplz headz!) ku fu fu!
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Title: continue!!!
Reviewed By: wfwr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 10:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please, please, please you have to continue this!! update! i love it! there´s not much stories like this =)
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Title: BACKA
Reviewed By: NoZoMi17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT>>>BUT YOU MUST UPDATE SOONER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SparkieGoesHuzzah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Continue please! I absolutly love it! Update!Update!Update!
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Title: -weird ass screeching noise-
Reviewed By: dun nuh nuh nuh On: October 09, 2006 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow I thought it would hate it....BUT I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE!!!!! Ahh haa haa!! -starts breaking down sobbing- p-please......UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: wazup On: September 28, 2006 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! it's better than i thought it would be..... u need 2 continue it! i would say it should end like: a) Al was actually Envy who made Ed think it was Al who hurt him and then Ed relizes it was evvy and that envy had killed al.... b) al wanted 2 kill ed because of he was upset ed and winry went out because al loved winry... then the military goes after al...... b) alternate ending.... roy was scared for ed so when ed gets better roy goes out with him and they kill al for hurting him... that's how i think it should end! it's wierd but im not sure where u r going with this! well it's good so far! sice u wanted an idea here r some!
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