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Title: great point of view!!
Reviewed By: Carochan On: October 19, 2006 18:37 CDT
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I started to read this fic and was so caught up by it, you know for shure how to tella story but what surprised me the most was the ending, not the epilogue, and thinking about it, i guess it may not be that diferent from the real inuyasha manga... i mean have you seen the last chapter, kikyo is dead (for real i guess) naraku ha sthe entire jewel and the last demon they killed had the hability yo read mind and it stoped when he read kagome's (why maybe 'cause she was thinking that she couldn't die there, she is the only one that can purifu the jewel now) wow i didin't realized this until i read your story you're SO wonderful!!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great ending to a great story. I'm glad everything turned out alright. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shocked* Now, I figured as much that she was going to die, but I just didn't realize it was going to be true. How sad. Great ending, though. Great story. Poor InuYasha. Finally someone to love and she happens to leave him. Again, great story, but a very surprising ending for the story.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 17:30 CDT
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Hmm, it's weird, I didn't get the notifications that this story was updated. Ah, so Naraku has finally resurfaced!
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done it again, Sueric. You always kept me wondering what wish she made, but then there it was. The only problem is why is she so distant from everyone. I have a feeling that she has to die to save them all. Good chapter, though. I am glad you decided to repost this story. While "Torrent" might be my top favourite, I believe this one is going to topple it. Just something about it reminds me of how distant and secret I am towards my friends. Great job and keep up the amazing work. You work well with these characters and I am glad to see my favourite pairing, InuYasha and Kagome, used very well. Hope to see a chapter soon. ^^
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update soon. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 17:47 CDT
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That would have to be the best excuse ever for Miroku's behavior lol.
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Reviewed By: xxsilentbeautyxx On: October 13, 2006 16:12 CDT
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i love the way you write and your oc's...i cant wait to find out whats going to happen..this is a very interesting plot(like all your stories) and its already drug me in
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I didn't know you had this story out! I'm so happy! I have something else to read now! So far this story is so great and I can't wait to read what happens. I hope Miroku is okay:(
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: JaeJae On: October 11, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always loved your writings, how you brought out the Inuyasha characters in their own unique way. Without messing up their personality, which Takahashi set up. I loved how you tied in Shiori, she is one of my favourtie characters. Too bad she doesn't have any reappearences. Well time to keep reading. adios
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Everything is so tense between them. I can't wait for more. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 22:54 CDT
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Uh oh. I feel so bad for Miroku, I mean the wind tunnel is coming back and he feels like he just lost Sango. I feel soo bad for him. I knew that something like that was going to happen though. I followed my gut instinct. I hope they will prevail over Naraku. I don't suppose I should say again since they didn't kill him before. I hope that Sango and Miroku come back together, I like them together, I don't want them apart. Alright, well happy writings and a merry muse. I'm out of here. I need some sleep.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 21:43 CDT
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Aww, poor Miroku; hmm, I take it Miroku's curse is going to come back soon then?
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Reviewed By: shadowyrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story why didn't you like it?
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