| "Comparative Studies" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2013 15:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'll be damned. Here's some one I haven't heard from in awhile. Well done my man! I read this one and your new one He Who Fights Monsters. You've gotten better! Both stories are well done and all the characters are very well done. Tp marks man! I look forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Vassman69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2013 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. It was very well written and its nice to have a bit of actual plot in these kinds of stories. I've always enjoyed your other stories so its good to see that you are still around and writing if only occasionally. |
Reviewed By: Dinah the fallen Angel On: March 02, 2009 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!! World needs more Ritsuko×Shinji fanfiction. I hope you will update more chapters and stories like this!!! Update soon, please!!!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: harbl On: December 08, 2006 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Well written, good grammar, etc, etc. Warp is right in saying the world needs more Ritsuko action, and the fact that it's Shinji/Ritsuko makes it even better! The end was a little abrupt though.
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Title: Cute, but short.
Reviewed By: . o O o . o O o . o O o . On: September 30, 2006 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, though the sex--hot though it is--seems to come suddenly and without warning. Ever consider doing a longer version? I know this was written for a contest, and there were some constraints on size. I think this has potential and might become a very good longer story. Oh, and the mental image of Ritsuko picking Shinji up and carrying him into the bedroom is cute and amuses me, but she's a tiny little woman, maybe about 5'2". I guess she's been eating her Wheaties.
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 22:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good stuff! The world needs more Ritsuko action. :)
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anouther great story, I just love your writing style. I really hope you continue this story I beleave you have multiple paths you could follow. Anyway hope to read more soon.
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