Reviewed By: Ssssnake On: May 28, 2007 21:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Absolutely wonderful! Good idea and story plan. You failed to point out, though, how Yumiko lived so long, I thought she was a human. Aside from that, it's GREAT! Please continue it. Thank you.
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