"One of those days" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Re: One Of Those Days Reviewed By: KasumiCho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 10:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Well that gave me a chuckle and a half! Poor litte Rei! I love how he translated what Mariah was saying- that was funny. And the junk about the villager on this death bed! My oh my... that was creative! I wish it had been longer, though. It could've continued with Mariah. But it was good. Keep writing, it would be a shame for such a lovely sense of humour to unused! KasumiCho*
| Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 21:52 CDT Comment/Review: continue!!!!!!!!!its funny! and was that mud on tyson?
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