| "Sesshomaru's Sexual Experiment" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My how did you get this idea.*S*
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Reviewed By: Sexy sesshy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I glad I was able to help with it hope chapter 2 is just as hot*kisses u deeply and rubs ur slit*^.^
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya babe. I love the story and love the idea...the only thing i would have done is developed the sentences a little more. I've seen u rp and ur other stories and it seems that u may have rushed to get this story up quickly. Other than that...it rocks as usual. Oh and for anyone else who may read this review...constructive criticism is the only thing allowed here. That's just a fair warning *growls at flamers* Lexi AKA Bubble-chan or to my babe 'Mommy'~_^
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