| "Duo's Boredom" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 09:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I gotta know more about thise parties lol and I gotta have more of this fic. Can't wait til you update!!
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Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 06:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, that was just a teaser! Update soon please! Cute, very cute!
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice start! Love the plot. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice start! Please update@@@@
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Reviewed By: Shinashi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your language.. And I like any fic where the pilots are playing games (yea, angst gets a bit old after awhile) There are quite a few mistakes, especially with characterization and the like- I could be a beta *shrugs*- but all in all.. I'll enjoy another chapter..
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