Reviewed By: cj On: October 27, 2006 14:49 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I looked at both versions of this fic and I have to say I like the new one better even though the older one had longer chapters. I only have one request, that updates be a bit faster so maybe there is a chance that the story will be finished sometime before three years from now...but that's only a suggestion and it's only a suggestions since I'm crazy in love with the idea of your story...I also really like how in the newer version you're paying closer attention to details and surroundings and even a bit more into the emotions. It's easier to visualize what's going on and I'm hoping that the newer chapters will also be explained and written like this so that there's more to 'chew on' so to speak
