| "The Blanket Fic" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: My review got cut off
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn thing cut me off... I ment to say that the (') and (") are showing up as f's and other letters in your story, if you fixed that this would be a ten for me.
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Title: OOOh nice
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn...that was more then nice. I loved the lack of hesitation and the last little bit at the end about the castle destroyer, very cool. (you do know that alot of the apostraphies*not spelling that right '
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good! I love how he was just overtaken with passion...and the end, how he can't get enough of her...I especially liked the part when he found the hermits bones, how he shows compassion...really good writing!
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pure awesomeness! I love your work!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 21:08 CST
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I had to read this again. It's still one of my favourite interludes. I like best, the actions that you don't explain. The look of bitterness on InuYasha's face, for example and the whole swept-away feeling when InuYasha sees Kagome in the bondage of her shirt and he just takes over. There is a depth to this story that I think is under-appreciated by most readers. I don't know exactly why, but every time I read this I want to cry a little bit. I feel like I know these two people and that they are real. So...good going.
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Reviewed By: Gfam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 13:18 CDT
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Ok, I already read the first one, and it's still good. But FYI, the last two sentences are a complete mess. Great job!
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Reviewed By: SoutasSister [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 22:06 CDT
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Try saving it as an .rtf document in plain 12-point Times New Roman font before you upload it. That might fix the quotation mark problems. I enjoyed this even with the upload errors. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Title: Hard to read, but still enjoyable...
Reviewed By: BurningTheMidnightOil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fiction, but the grammar errors detract GREATLY from the awesome-ness of your work. I suggest that you read your future works after posting, since media miner has a tendancy to mess up even to most carefully edited story. Other than the errors, I can't see anything else but lemony goodness! Excellent work!
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Title: Houston I think we have a Problem...
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: October 01, 2006 20:17 CDT
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I think the uploading to mediaminer ate all your quotations... and replaced them with "g"s and "h"s. It's kind of hard to read. Can I reserve my review for when fixed?
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Title: still in love....
Reviewed By: butteryasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 18:55 CDT
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i so love this. thanks for posting it!
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